LO4 - Analysis and application of findings Part 2 (P6, M3)

This is my teacher feedback, I was told what went well and what needs to be approved which are the following:

IDENT 1:

• In the section where the four characters are running away, there was my thumb in the shot in the scene, therefore I was instructed to either try crop it or stretch it and manipulate it to the eye. 
• it is not "streaming weekly at 6pm " redo the voice over and say "catch it weekly" as it would be better and more accurate with what I'm trying to portray and advertise as an ident.
• the graphics at the end of "stay tuned for more on channel 4" should be removed as it too much and not needed, the voice over for that is enough.

IDENT 2:

• She stated she likes my idea and there isn't much to alter
• I was told not to bother with the candles on the cake seen as it made no sense as it lead to a birthday cake rather then an anniversary cake celebration because of the candles and just cut the cake straight.
• Miss had advised that I could talk and include a Christmas schedule and make my voice over more Christmas enhanced.