LO4 - Analysis and application of findings Part 1 (P6, M3)

This is my focus group feedback, I was told what went well and what needs to be approved which are the following:

TV IDENT 1:

• Harleen had stated that there needs to be music in the beginning of my ident as it is very awkward. 
• Faz had stated that he believes that the running doesn't have a meaning and doesn't see how it correlates to the ident, although I shorted after explained. 
• Fajars view of the transitions were that they are unnesessary
• Millie pointed out that ident is too long and needs to be shortened as it has passed the time allocated to us. too long of an ident means that the kids watching would find it boring and unpleasing to watch. 
• Faz then realises he prefers putting the programs at the end of the ident.  
• Yunus' input is to add a narrative or voice over to help understand what my ident is trying to display to the public because all he could see and was told is whats coming up next. 
• Fajar then remembered that during the ident she heard that the sound over the acting wasn't on time and was out of place and it was tellable so I needed to put it at the same time that I was filming in the shot. 
• Yunus added that the logo should have been on the right side of the screen as that is traditionally how it is presented on tv and how I should have a look at how channel 4 usual style is when they post idents. 
• Millie tried to state in a nice way that stay tuned for update is unnecessary and silly to put at the end. 
• Fajar said I need to definitely do more voice overs rather then just text.
• Raima and Charleen agreed that I need to make it into less of a youtube channel styled video. 

TV IDENT 2:

• Raima and Harleen stated that it gives more birthday then anniversary vibes to fix that . 
• Yunus said he thinks that it is sending too many messages and is to all over the place as in busy body. (Christmas, birthday, anniversary). Yunus just said to have one message through out that would be more appealing. 
• Faz disagreed and saiid Christmas themed should say because it is festive.
• Millie said I should change the music. 
• Yunus suggested to reshoot some scenes to improve the idea that is portrayed.